Published writers!

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We thought about how the character would feel throughout the film clip.

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Jazmine’s internal monolgue.

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Heidi’s internal monologue.

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Lewis tried to show empathy for the character through his writing skills.

 

This week we were so impressed with our Year 6 writers that we decided to email them to the Literacy Shed and they were so amazed by them that they have displayed them on their Literacyshed Showcase!  We are so proud!

We used a film clip, Replay, from the literacy shed as a stimulus for our writing.  Following that we thought about the two characters in the film and how their emotions may have changed throughout the story.  We planned our ideas into thought bubbles and then used this to help us write an internal monologue from the characters point of view.  You can check out more of our writing at http://www.literacyshedshowcase.com/year-6.html

Well done year 6, keep up the fantastic writing!